来一篇英语短文，我写的，大家来看看
ENGLISH DUTY REPORTToday I’m going to talk about a legend.It is very familiar to you all.It’s a very famous Chinese traditonal love story.You can guess which story it is from the picture. This is a lady. Um….Perhaps a little difficult.Does anybody know the answer now?Well,it’s LIANGZHU.It was so interesting that when I use the translation software to find how to say LIANGZHU in English,the computer told me a word,a simple word.Can you guess?It’s Butterfly..This word is very impressed to me.But I prefer to call it LIANGZHU.You must know the story very well,so I won’t introduce the details.And this is a famous bridge.Of couse it’s relevant to LIANGZHU.Someone talked about it in a Chinese class.Do you remember?It’s called Long Bridge. It’s
related to a well-known scene——十八相送.I didn’t find how to say it in English.It happened on this bridge.It’s mainly about when ZHU were studying in Hangzhou,ZHU’s father missed her a lot and requested her to go back home.So LIANG and ZHU farewelled on this bridge.As you can see,this bridge isn’t long at all.But when they were on this bridge,they wandered 9000 meters just on this bridge.We can see how deeply they loved each other.There is also a famous piece about this scene. This piece has several forms.It’s played by zithers(古筝)，piano，violin Erhu and electronic organ.And I liked the zithers one best. I’ll play it to you.Close your eyes(…music…)When I listened to this piece at home,I suddenly couldn’t help crying and I don’t know why.Look at this sentence I like best.”LIANG loves ZHU forever.”As they were going to say goodbye and even didn’t know if they could reunion,LIANG promised it.Forever is a big promise all the time.Maybe we can’t believe all “forever”.But we have no reason to wonder it this time.E...There are two girls and they performed the opera at Children’s Day.This opera is a type of Chinese opera, originating in Zhejiang Province.You know?(越剧)This was my classmate.She’s quite pretty,right?By the way,traditiongal culture is really interesting and significant.We should know more.Thanks. it is 之类的太多了。。这样演讲的时候听众会感觉很别扭。。话说我们初中也有duty report 首先这是啥＝＝…要水区的牛X留学生们修改吗？其次有错…我读完了… 2# txwdtxwd2004 谢谢你
那你帮我改改吧？ 。。。你自己先读一下，然后最好同样的句型和用法不要在接近的地方出现太多次。。。这样会好一些。。因为我用手机上的。。不好帮你改。。 怎么办？我看不懂看不下去啊 都是短句。有条件可以把一些句子合成复句，听起来会舒服很多。 看得眼睛花…只有初三水平… 简单的句子真多啊。。。多得我这个英语水平很低的人都看不下去了。。。
LZ是初中生吗？ 本帖最后由 ygo 于 2009-11-23 13:59 编辑
very well ………………这就是语病
没有从句…………太简单了，就是我这种已经不玩英语的都知道要用的时候砸些从句出来唬人 本帖最后由 d指 于 2009-11-23 14:26 编辑
我英语不好 — —
表喷我 — —
This word is very impressed to me.
This word is very impressive to me.
Look at this sentence I like best.
Look at this sentence (which) I like the most.
As they were going to say goodbye
改成farewell吧
越剧=shaoxing opera
I use the translation software to find how to say LIANGZHU.
I didn’t find how to say it in English.
这些是不需要写的，写了反而有副作用
有点过于口语化了，长句是必须的 嗯，我会继续改正的 恩=3=看不懂…正常… LZ是来问作业的么 英语作文老不及格...不用问我了 英语什么的最最最讨厌了TAT 建議LZ跟 2B哥學習。
以上。 看不懂 lz我告诉你吧，这种演讲不需要写的复杂，用简单的语法就够了，而且也不容易错，写的也简单
拼命用一些看起来很厉害的词啊短语啊，自己背起来又麻烦，而且台下的人绝大多数的人都听不懂，这又何苦呢 20# 尜Mi鋒_LOVE街波 我演讲是念出来
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