-__-演讲稿求鉴定语法错误

黄泉川彼方

The lightnovel named ToaruMajutsunoIndex was writed by Kazma Kamachi in 2004.It's said that the writer was only 15 years old at that time.By October 19, 2010,ToaruMajutsunoIndex had been sold 5.2 million
copies.And then,In 2011，It was awarded the highest prize of lightnovel in Japen.
Toaru Majutsu no Indexis set in Academy City at western Tokyo ,which studies scientifically advanced superhuman students with powers, but is also set in a world where magic is real.
Tōma Kamijōis a student in this city whose right hand, the 'Imagine Breaker', has the ability to negate any supernatural powers, but also his own luck. One day he finds a young girl hanging on his balcony railing namedIndex. She is a sister from a secret magic branch of theChurch of England, and her mind has been implanted with theIndex Librorum Prohibitorum—103,000 forbidden magical books.And then,'Imagine Breaker' and Index Librorum Prohibitorum's story is beginning...

月下の白兔

我了割草这是英语...还bacheng...

qisiwole

英文部分没看不过镰池和马是“Kazma Kamachi”

hman

谷歌也会有拼写错误！

月下の白兔

The lightnovel named <INDEX> was published by 镰池和马 in 2004.
It's said that the writer was only 15-year-old at that time.By October 19, 2010,<INDEX>had had been sold the 我真看不懂是多少本 books.
And then,In 2011，It was awarded the Highest prize of lightnovel in Japen.
The story happens in the west of Tokyo which is divided out of this city,."super capacity development" has been part of school curricula.

there eighty percent of the two hundred and thirty million citizens are students, so the city is famous for the Academy.
Every day they are in the ultra-capacity development on competition. 这句看不懂...

According to different intensity, capacities can be divided into seven ranks from  Lv0 to Lv6.The main role of the story Kamijo Tomato上条番茄233 is a 'Levl zero', but he is not completely without power
his ability is being able to invalidate all the supernatural force  called ‘Image Breaker’.
On One summer day Kamijo Toma was on the balcony at home, he met a nun,尼姑2333这里还是用sister吧 named Index, <and escape from the magic out of the world, and now being pursued in the magician .>真看不懂..
In this way, the article when Toma stepped into the wonderful and fantasy world, and began fighting...同看不懂...



我大段大段得看不懂...

月下の白兔

哦，divided改成separated貌似好点..

黄泉川彼方

英文部分没看不过镰池和马是“Kazma Kamachi”
qisiwole 发表于 2011-3-27 22:37

感谢，到处找不到河马的罗马音

黄泉川彼方

擦原来谷哥也有拼写错误...

黄泉川彼方

The lightnovel named  was published by 镰池和马 in 2004.
It's said that the writer was only 15-year-old at that time.By October 19, 2010,had had been sold the 我真看不懂是多少本 books.
And then,In 2 ...
月下の白兔 发表于 2011-3-27 22:44

已经售出一千万本...看不懂没事，反正没人会认真听的，都是看图
我就是问问有没有什么严重到会被英语老师干掉的语法错误

月下の白兔

你签名.-_-...是undeniable..

月下の白兔

已经售出一千万本...看不懂没事，反正没人会认真听的，都是看图
我就是问问有没有什么严重到会被英语老师干掉的语法错误
黄泉川彼方 发表于 2011-3-27 22:52

相当多-_-...

黄泉川彼方

故事讲述的是从东京都西部被分割出来的这座都市中，“超能力开发”被列为学校课程的一部分。在二百三十万人口中，有八成都是学生，所以被称为学园都市。他们每天都在超能力开发上进行相互竞争。根据能力不同，可以分为7级，从无能力（Lv0）到绝对能力（Lv6）。故事的主人公上条当麻是这里的一个无能力者，一直过着不幸的生活，但他并非完全没有能力，而是他的能力是能够将一切异能效果无效化，名叫幻想杀手。某一个暑假的日子，在家里的阳台上，他遇见了一位修女，这位少女自称自己的名字叫禁书目录（Index），并是从魔术的世界逃了出来，现在正在被魔法师追赶中。就这样，上条当麻一脚踏进了奇妙而美丽的世界，开始了战斗……掌握了十万三千本魔法书（魔导书）的少女与拥有抹杀一切幻想的“幻想杀手”右手的少年，将面临一系列惊险故事…

黄泉川彼方

你签名.-_-...是undeniable..
月下の白兔 发表于 2011-3-27 22:52

哈哈哈我又手滑了=口=

拉提亚斯

第一句就觉得named和published不妥……我觉得不用往下看了……
往下看了一行，15-year-old常用作定语，表语用15 years old。少年你真的没问题么= =

黄泉川彼方

-____-谷哥现在连英语机翻也靠不住了啊

灵感木易

你要是写英文的话直接在wikipedia搜Toaru Majutsu no Index就是英文版的了。。。。干嘛还要翻译 又麻烦错误又容易多。。。顺便吐槽下虽然我没看过 但幻想杀手的话应该是“Imagine Breaker”

黄泉川彼方

囊达阔略!我了个去!原来还有这办法啊!

黄泉川彼方

果断一改-___-

HawkSunSky

就算是介绍小说内容，用one day引导的话，后面还是请用过去式…相反第一句请用一般现在时（不过其实is written和was written都有，前者更地道罢了）

风见林

have one kind east west call wiki