英文自介写好，请达人帮助

游戏♀天使

原帖由 enyafan 于 2006-2-15 01:43 发表


游戏向动画设计，其实就是游戏制作，要和国外的公司技术员交流，阅读文献……

交流?[wdb1]饭局?

独行战士

日语.........看见就头晕....

sniperaw99

原帖由 映儿 于 2006-2-15 20:06 发表

要改的话直接改成since 2000即可，多写无益，英语写作要求简单明了。

不错……

另;
、Busy though I was in this three years,中this改为the past
2、But unfortunately, I have sent my novels to many editors for whole six years, but always failed.可为:
Unfortunately,Since 2000,I have sent my novels to many editors but always not be published.

3(同fee的意见):
>>are always my favourite things.
改成are always my favourites.

>> there exists no things can stop my way,
改成 nothing can stop my dream. or nothing can stop me

sniperaw99

漏了句：祝LZ成功！